Narrative Writing - Favourite Sentences So Far

On a raining Sunday, George's mother was about to go shopping...

Thomas

She is really bossy and is really mean and sits in an armchair all day...

Ayden

"George, go get me my medicine you selfish brute!"

Jade

(lightbulb) I've got a good idea, it's going to have the most historic things in it...

Andrew

It's too cold, warm it up! No buts - just do it...

Alex

I don't think it is ordinary for an ugly thing like her to have powers

Jayden

Where's my saucer (I NEED A SAUCER)!?!?!?!

Caitlin

It didn't make her less grumpy, grouchy or grumbly...

Grace

Wrong! Grandma gleefully shouted jumping up and down...

Breanna

I got it! I'll make a new medicine for her and it will be so disgusting and she will eat nicely and be polite...

Rebekah

She felt very floaty like a fat balloon...

Zarina (using a simile, which is... when you describe something with something else. What does it do? It compares two things. Why is it helpful to your audience to read a simile? It makes things stand out, it makes things so others can understand the idea, it makes it more interesting because you learn more, it creates pictures in the audience's head...)

Ellie Poem

Ellie

caring,fun,entertaining,respectful
sibling of Alex
lover of horses ,family and friends
who feels laughter and friendship
who fears spiders heights and earthquakes
who would like to see joy and laughter
resident of christchurch
brown.

Nasi's brother came to school to play rugby with us.

Aidan's Acrostic Poem

M usic  star singer/king of pop

I ncredible person to work  with

C aring for everyone

H elping save the human race

A rtist king of pop

E nergetic pride in strong songs

L oving  people and children 

J  ackson his last name of fame

Listen to this as you read my poem:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8rVRjLPObBs

auto bio poem

Tiesha

Caring, friendly, silly.

Sibling of Shaye.

Lover of basketball and KFC.

Who feels happy when playing.

Who needs a friend and her Mum.

Who gives lots of hugs.

Who fears spiders and snakes.

Who would like to see a netball trophy sitting on my shelf.

Resident of Burnham.

Stephens.

Carmen

Kind, cheerful, carful, helpful

Sibling to Dalton, Kassidy, Hailey

Lover of running games

Who feels happness

Who needs chocolate

Who gives chocolate to friends and family

Who fears jobs,scorpians,snakes

Who would like to see home and bed

Resident of Burnham

George

kyle

likes hanging around people cool sporty friendly

lover of sports

who feels good when playing sports

who needs a pool

who gives friend ship 

i fear falling in a rivers

who would like to see the twin towers

residents of christchurch

meijer

Carlito

Sporty,funny,random,smart

Sibling of Antonio and Amelie

Lover of sport,heights,family,chocolate and sushi

Who feels happy playing cricket

Who needs to travel

Who gives help to family 

Who fears snakes and death

Who would like to see no wars

Resident of Rolleston

Shalfoon

all about me

jade                                                                                                                                                                     active, games,nice,fun                                                                                                                                       brother of teao                                                                                                                                                    lover of friends,dogs,movies,games                                                                                                               who feels happy when sleeping

who needs a bigger room

who fears snakes,scorpions

who gives food,presents

who would like to see food everywhere

resident of christchurch

adams        

taleah

taleah

kind happy and a girl

sibling of tahemaka 

lover of dancing , singing , drawing , and sport

who feels cheerful all the time 

who needs support and happiness 

who gives love and support to her family

who fears earwigs and bees 

who would like to make the world a better place

resident 46 masfield drive 

NUI

Taleah

• Taleah 
  

kind, Happy , Funny , And a girl

sibling of Tahemaka 

Lover of dancing ,singing , drawing , and sport.

Who feels cheerful all the time.

Who needs support and happiness

Who gives love and support to her family 

who fears earwigs and bees

who would like to make the world a better place 

SAVANNAH

Kind,caring,fun and smart.

Sibling of treamain.of

Sisters of tayah and mishin.

Lover of games,toys and lollys.

Who feels happy when colouring.

Who needs smiles and fun.

Who gives freind ship ,fun and smiles.

Who fears bugs,snakes and sea.

Who would like to see every ones smiles.

Resident of christchurch.

KING.

maxs auto Bio Poem/ All About Me

max 

sporty,funny,kool,fun

sibling of Cadence and Cassius 

lover of touch and leauge

I feel happy when I play x box

I need a new hummer limozine

I give people toys for birthdays

I fear Aiden cook

I would like to see myself win lotto

resident of burnham

kingi

Holly

Sibling of Max and Charlotte.

 Lover of sports,friends and pizza.

Who feels happy when playing with friends.

 Who gives friendship.

Who fears bugs.

Who would like to see Hannah Simpson.

Resident of Christchurch Burnham.

Davis.

CAITLIN

responsible,fun,funny,caring.

sibling of lochlan.

lover of sport,friends,icecream and hydroslide.

who feels joy when learning.

who needs fun,support and learning.

who fears dogs spiders.

who gives lots of love.

who would like to see smiles.

resident of Christchurch.

Mckenzie

Autobio Poem

Joseph

cool,funny,fun,sporty

sibling of Kiriwai,Jade,Jacob and Noel

lover of my nephew

who feels sad when people die

who needs money

who gives fun

who fears nothing

who would like to see the world

resident of Rolleston

Taipari

sophie

funny,anoying

only kid

lover of pools ,famliy and friends

who feels joy when I play teeball

who needs joy happiness and fun

who gives friendship

who would you like to see happiness

fear of bees and spiders

resident of christchurch rolleston

mumm.

auto Bio Poem/ All About Me

Trinity

Sporty,caring and responsible

Sister of Charlize

Lover of  food and sports

Who feels energetic 

Who gives care and love

Who needs their family

Who fears spiders

Who would like to see all my family

Resident of Christchurch

Murphy

autobio poem

sophie

fun,funny,annoying caring

sibling of courtenay,abbey,calsea,renee and sam

lover of pools, family,friends and sports

who feels joy when playing teeball and netball

who needs friendship,fun and kindness

who feares big spiders

who would like to see happiness

resident of christchurch rolleston

cameron

Auto Bio Poem/ All About Me

Jodie

Fun,Honest,Caring,responsible

Sister of Jesse

Lover of Family and friends, Sports,and Shoping

Who Feels happy when playing with Friends

Who needs Laughter and friends

Who gives Smiles,Joy, and fun

Who fears spiders and Heights

Who would like to see everyone having fun

Resident of Christchurch

Cox